I'm pretty sure (as of the writing of this review) that the 1600 or so plays disagree with that "dumb voice" comment of yours.=)
Anywho, as for this review, I, myself, liked it a lot!
My only issue would be the instruments or rather the quality of said instruments. They were utilized well however and I can't (and won't) give a bad score just because of the sample quality.
Your voice was a little shaky at times too but, man does it shine throughout parts of the song!
I also give huge props to anyone who call hold a tune with their voice because I cannot for the life of me so I've learned to appreciate vocal more.=)
Keep up the great work! You'll only get better!!