I have to say, your skill with using those strings keeps getting better and better and when I heard that choir, my jaw dropped. (literally.) Absolutely amazing! The story was a nice touch and creates a very clear image when I hear this. It adds a lot to to the overall emotion.
If I may offer one piece of advice or rather an observation, the horns (from 2:52 and on) seemed a bit... hmm... loud? Too sharp I guess? Or maybe just the melody they were playing seemed to detract from the overall piece. I'm NOT saying get rid of them though. I could be very wrong though. It may just be me.
Regardless, an astounding piece of music for sure! Well done!